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    Alana

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    i do prefer the wide angle distortion here, and the way the legs are leading the eyes, very good indeed, the color treatment and the sky at the background is fantastic, the placement of the lights at the background is creative indeed, often people do not resort to this kind of placements, the placement of the hand is not at all distracting to me,

    but somehow i feel the composition is not systematic or well organized, the lights at the background are placed in such a way as to compose it symmetrically but the other stands( except the two ) are of no mean, the lead in legs are not completely in the frame, some area on the front are out of the frame, we often choose a background, for any kind of photography, which is uncluttered or at least complimentary with the subject, but here the sky is very dramatic which tends to draw the eyes easily, and so the light stands( resulting a distraction from the subject), the legs with the face form a triangle but the placement of the hands are really a hindrance to the composition over all,

    the most interesting part of portrait works are the eyes, but here i can hardly see any catch light, as well as i really can not understand whether the eyes of the model is open or close,

    although, it is a creative photography indeed, we usually do not see this kind of portraiture works and i do think it is worthy of discussion...

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