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Very good composition; I love it.

Maybe you could get rid of the boat in the background to make it perfect

Well done Mark

I love to work with my good old Semflex sometimes.

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Thanx a lot for all these helpfull critics my friends, I am going to consider them for the final touch on this photo; this is the first one of a new serie, more to come here when I come back from holidays. 

Very good light control, a 6 for me

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Agree with William, very original shot, a fav' 6 for me; bravo Jay

Lovely scene, very sensual atmosphere well caught with the right light. Maybe you could correct the door (,) on the left which is not vertical, and disturbs a bit?

Good work bravo

What I feel straight away is a perfect harmony between Bernadeta anddddd nature around her. Light is very good , well done

I love this composition, and the post treatment you used. Highlights on the left are a bit disturbing at first, but make it look genuine in the the end. One point maybe, next time ask the model on the left to put one foot on the peddles. Bravo

Wow, the sky is incredible, nearly unreal!, the left one is surprising as it seems that Bernadeta creates a hole in the clouds,; the right one is my fav' as the pose is more in the climax.

Yes very nice B&W shot; crop is very tight, but it works very well. Well done

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Beautifull work, bravo, a 6  for me