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Any comments appreciated. :) -
Any comments appreciated. :)
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I love the concept, her pose and expression, and how you chose to crop this so she's looking out into the darkness. But I don't like how over-lighted--almost white--the right side of her face appears. Maybe it was better to pull back a bit there. Especially the line between white and tan bothers me. -
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I like the pose, but the environmental portrait lacks light--the brightest part of the scene is the arm to the top-right outside his tent, and the details in his hair are lost in shadow. Also, while the table behind him might serve to tell us about what he's selling, since the only objects I can identify are the two scales, in this case it's just busy/distracting.
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I like the composition, but it's underexposed. Options: (1) increase the ISO one level, (2) shoot in RAW so your can correct the exposure in post-processing, (3) use a flash with some sort of diffuser (mini soft box, 80/20 bounce, etc).
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I love the colors and texture of the background, and your subjects make for a pleasing traditional portrait... except for one major flaw... the girl on the right is blurred without good reason. This suggests you should have used a higher f-stop to increase the depth of field and set your focus using the girl in the middle. I also notice the boy's hair is a bit too dark due to your use of direct flash, and wonder if ceiling-bouncing was a possibility. Good luck with your photography. :)
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