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    More information about "NEW YORK 17"

    NEW YORK 17

    in Street

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    Nice capture of her expression. I find the pole in the foreground distracting, though, and it might have been interesting to be able to also see the entire couple in the poster in the background.
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    Untitled

    in Journalism

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    To me, this is a gutsy photo. I don't think I would ever frame it this way (that's meant as a compliment). I would, however, commit to the immense black frame and get rid of the specks of light in the upper part of the picture.
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    Shipwreck

    in Landscape

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    Great mood. Overall, I really like the lighting. I wonder if you may have gone a little too far in the upper right hand corner though. That's quite a big dark spot.
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    Untitled

    in Street

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    I really like the idea. Almost makes the left escalator look like a slide. I do wish there wasn't a person standing at the top, though. They wouldn't be able to do that on a slide. :)
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    Untitled

    in Portrait

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    Very nice portrait and framing. It's a small thing, but the white splotch in the background just to the right of her hands is a little distracting, as is the blue strip under her legs. Just a suggestion.
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