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    Blacksmith shop

    Comments and critiques are welcomed.
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    Blacksmith shop

    Artist: A Lau; Exposure Date: 2014:08:23 11:18:10; Copyright: A LAU; Make: NIKON CORPORATION; Model: NIKON D3; ExposureTime: 10/40 s; FNumber: f/16; ISOSpeedRatings: 200; ExposureProgram: Manual; ExposureBiasValue: 0/6; MeteringMode: Pattern; Flash: Flash did not fire; FocalLength: 44 mm; FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 44 mm; Software: Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows; ExifGpsLatitude: 48 49 48 48; ExifGpsLatitudeRef: R98;
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    man kijkk

    The exposure and the sharpness on the subject are quite good. The large amount of negative space in the middle, plus the totally unconnected element on the far left are not adding to this image. I would crop it so it is about the person, sort of like a casual portrait type. On closer look, the lighting on the subject face doesn't constitute good portraiture lighting. Most of the face is in shadow with the nose catching a glimpse of light. Hope you have other that you can work on.
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    Sale

    Street photo is about telling a story. I don't see any interaction of the people in this picture. They are all engaging in the most common and boring activity, i.e. playing with the smartphone. The uneven lighting is very uncomfortable to look at. The scene is random. Sorry, it doesn't work for me.
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    The Little One

    This looks like an infrared image where the green of the pine turns silverly white. I like the tree's position on the left 1/3 and against the bright spot of the sky. Very good depth and detail. I would suggest tracing a dark line in the edges of the trunk that connects the upper branch to the lower one. At first glance, I thought the upper tree grew on the other rim of the canyon.
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    I see the light

    Artist: A Lau; Exposure Date: 2014:08:16 15:02:24; Copyright: A LAU; Make: NIKON CORPORATION; Model: NIKON D3; ExposureTime: 10/600 s; FNumber: f/8; ISOSpeedRatings: 400; ExposureProgram: Manual; ExposureBiasValue: 0/6; MeteringMode: Pattern; Flash: Flash did not fire; FocalLength: 35 mm; FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 35 mm; Software: Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows; ExifGpsLatitude: 48 49 48 48; ExifGpsLatitudeRef: R98;
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    DSC02477 (enlarge)

    The image seems under exposed. From this POV, the foreground blossom is overlapping the ones in the back, creating a clutter feeling. The center position composition can be improved if it is moved off center.
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    ND3_2930x

    Not sure what category to put this in. Critique and comment are welcomed.
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    ND3_2930x

    Artist: A Lau; Exposure Date: 2014:08:23 11:14:31; Copyright: A LAU; Make: NIKON CORPORATION; Model: NIKON D3; ExposureTime: 30/10 s; FNumber: f/16; ISOSpeedRatings: 200; ExposureProgram: Manual; ExposureBiasValue: 0/6; MeteringMode: Pattern; Flash: Flash did not fire; FocalLength: 35 mm; FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 35 mm; Software: Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows; ExifGpsLatitude: 48 49 48 48; ExifGpsLatitudeRef: R98;
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    A run off near my house

    Artist: A Lau; Exposure Date: 2014:04:26 16:38:55; Copyright: A LAU; Make: NIKON CORPORATION; Model: NIKON D3; ExposureTime: 10/30 s; FNumber: f/5; ISOSpeedRatings: 200; ExposureProgram: Manual; ExposureBiasValue: 4294967293/6; MeteringMode: Pattern; Flash: Flash did not fire; FocalLength: 44 mm; FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 44 mm; Software: Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows; ExifGpsLatitude: 48 49 48 48; ExifGpsLatitudeRef: R98;
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