No Gabriele, not too strong. She's a beautiful girl with beautiful breasts, and you are relaying your perception of her in a beautiful way. Erotic art nudes are a reflection of our thoughts and fantasies... perfectly normal, and not always easy to do. You have done well with this though, and I too, like the B&W presentation!
Even though I generally don't care for "over posed" shots (even though I've done plenty myself!), I like this one Raymond! I like both the environ and your choice of models too!
This is a nice shot Mark! I love the feelings she invokes, and I certainly appluad your choice of models! For me, she has perfect breasts and she's lovely!