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    Lance Armstrong

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    Shot this while he was climbing up Cole Grade Road in northern San

    Diego county. Out of the entire series, this is the only one where he

    is fairly in-focus. Cropped a bit. Could I have improved anything

    while shooting this? I'm trying to improve my "creative gap" between

    what I envision before/during shooting and what it actually looks like

    in print/on-screen. Thanks for viewing, hope you enjoyed this moment

    in time.

    Untitled

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    Thanks for viewing. Hope you enjoyed. Could you leave some words

    with me to help me improve? Converted this in Silver Efex Pro.

    Skylight and Shy

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    Hello, thanks for looking. Natural light only (window light in main

    room, skylight and window in the room behind her). Looking to learn,

    so hit me with the HELPFUL critiques. Only post done was hitting the

    "Antique" preset in Adobe Lightroom, and resizing for web.

     

    Hope you enjoyed!

  1. Seems a bit busy, and the pink bikini line (I can only guess that is what is giving the extra color in the region of the joint between human and horse bodies) is very distracting. Your control of light is good through the editing, but it's just a bit too "fantasy" for me.

    Murmansk in Norway

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    I like the idea of this shot. The contrasts between the water, the rusty ship and the green/gray of the shoreline make it quite dynamic in that regard. The composition leaves me wanting to see more of the setting and possibly from a lower vantage point, if possible. It is also just a tad over-saturated for my taste. Nice shot, could be better with a bit more refinement.

    Untitled

          3

    Thanks for viewing, hope you enjoy. I'm here to learn, so any helpful

    critiques or honest opinions would be much appreciated. I shot this

    in the shade, there was a big white wall for reflected light. Is the

    crop distracting? I sometimes think this should be looser but

    sometimes I like it as is.

    Untitled

          3

    Do you see any way I could improve this? Would another angle on the

    leaf show more gesture? Is it not sharp enough?

     

    Thanks for rating/viewing, hope you enjoyed.

  2. I feel that his hands are a more accurate graph of time elapsed inlife than is his still shiny watch. Please rate if you view, betteryet take the 10 seconds to give me ideas on how to improve this image,or the next one I make.

     

    Thanks for viewing, hope you enjoyed!

    Untitled

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    Thanks for looking, shot with 70-300 Canon on a 40D. First outing

    trying to get surf shots, so any comments/suggestions would be

    welcome!

    Mt. Laguna 2

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    Yes, I know I have my info on the image. Please comment on

    something other than this fact if you feel compelled to comment.

    Constructive crit is welcome.

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