mike_taylor9

How long did you track?

My goodness. That must have been a large telescope.

Add more contrast and reduce the exposure to reduce the halo impinging on the moon.

Very nice, a professional job of filter selection and compositing.

How long was your track? I get similar results with my Canon Powershot SX60 at 1 second with no tracking. I would expect your colors to be more intense.

The C8 should have given you bands.

With that setup you should have seen the ring divisions, if the seeing was good.

Out in the desert?

Was this tracked? If not. What speed and ISO?

It seems to be out of focus. Use manual and set to infinity.

Either blow out the backlight completely or bring it down to correct exposure and let the sillouette darken.

Hold the sky, bring down the light glare, lighten up the roof slightly.

Not sufficient shadow detail. Bright highlights should be brought down slightly so lines show.

Was the sign important? Should show the whole thing.

Shadow on red building should be lighter.

Shadows are too deep.

Try to subdue the lights more, at least until the frames fully show.

Should try bracketing.

How can this picture be improved? The lady in the background is one of

the chiefs.