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    Harvest

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    I really like the composition but dislike the DOF. It appears the rear view mirror is the most important aspect of the photo because it's one of the few things in focus. I think max DOF would have been better.

     

    Dennis

  1. I wonder why you cut off the front of the bike? It seems to me, since the model is reclining on the bike, it is more important to the photo than the artwork in the background. Unlike the other comentors, I also feel the background is incongruous with the motorcycle. All toll, I'm not a fan of this photo... sorry.

    Gili Marie

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    And a very attractive daughter she is!

     

    Very nice photo. Great lighting and composition. I especially like the wide DOF where all of the subject is in focus because so much of her is included in the frame. The inner headband of her hat is a minor distraction but a fine photo none-the-less.

     

    Dennis

     

     

    Untitled

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    Very nice photo. Good contrasting colors, nice composition. And the best part is all of the subject is in focus!

     

    Dennis

  2. Hi Chad,

     

    I like the background colors. The main problem I see is that everything is out of focus. If you were trying for that effect, congratulations. I would have shot all of the spider and it's web in focus (f11 or so) with the background OOF.

     

    Dennis

    Flower

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    Very good photo, Mark. I really like your wide DOF so that all the petals are in focus. Good composition with the bulb in the back left. Whatever is in the upper right is a bit distracting, though.

     

    Good job!

    Veronika

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    I believe you've done very well. Great lighting and composure. With the DOF you have here, the background isn't busy at all. I think it adds to the frame.

     

    Great photo!

    Untitled

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    Hi Viva,

     

    A truly wonderful photograph. The composition is perfect! I like her expression and the wind playing with her hair. Excellent work!

     

    Dennis

  3. Hi William,

     

    Nice photo. Great color, nice stop action and just the right amount of DOF! For me, though, I feel the composition is backwards. I would have liked the motorcycle on the left and the spectator on the right. I think that composition would have shown more action in the photo, especially seeing more of the cycle's shadow on the ground.

     

    Regardless, good work.

     

    Dennis

    Untitled

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    Hi Thangavelu,

     

    I really like the church because of it's interesting architecture. It is a bit too dark though. I also think it's a bit too cropped (or too much wide angle) - a little more foregound, scenery on the left and sky would have made it slightly better.

     

    Dennis

    Saska

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    Hi Janus,

     

    Very nice photo. I like the composition but think it might be a bit better with about 1" less on the bottom - just a bit too much shoulder/arm is showing and distracts my eye. Great DOF.

     

    Dennis

    Untitled

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    Hi Satyajit,

     

    I really like this photograph. It leaves so much to the imagination of the viewer! Composition is perfect. B&W is perfect for this subject. Subject's expression is marvelous. The only critism I have is the lower right portion where I can't make out what is creating the whiteout - probably her garment? IMO, this is a very minor issue in a great photo. Thanks for posting this.

     

    Dennis

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