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    Her face is completely burnt out. Even he is burnt out in places. Maybe because weighted metering of dark hair, cloths and background? Try spot metering on the skin.
  1. I like it. I know how hard it is to get good action shots, so well done. The "tracking" is good - something I personally have trouble with.

     

    That said, I would have liked to see the bikers eyes, and I think it could have been cropped/framed better. There is little point in the space above his head, and I would have rather you hadn't cut off his shadow. I little more space in front of him might have helped as well.

     

    Also, this kind of shot works best (especially with such a strong shadow) if you can catch it as they are in the air.

     

    I hope you find my critique helpful.

     

    Thad

    12 Days Old

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    A company (which will remain nameless) liked this picture of my son

    enough to ask me if I would mind them using it to illustrate the use

    of incubator equipment.

     

    Do you think they made a good choice? Why? If not, why not?

     

    Thad

    Mucky Boy!

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    All constructive criticism is welcomed, but I'm most interested in

    what people think of the way I've cropped this. The original had

    more black background to the left, right, and a little above. Mum's

    forearm could also be seen to the right, which I cropped out as I

    found it distracting.

     

    Note that this photo is "candid" not "set up", and taken hand held,

    with "available light".

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