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    Converse All Stars

    in Street

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    I love this picture, it has an edgy quality that really works. It looks like direct flash due to the extremely hard, dark shadows - next time maybe try bouncing or diffusing the flash.
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    green and golden

    in Nature

          3

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    I think this picture has potential, but to really make it work I would rotate the image so that the tree trunks are straight - the tilt of them is really distracting. Second, I would boost the saturation and contrast, or play with curves, to really make the colors pop against each other.
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    Brother

    in Portrait

          2

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    Well, no one knows what your ideas are except you, so only you can judge if this picture expresses them! If it looks how you want it, I'd say great job! :) I do like the motion blur and colors, it's interesting!
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    Swallowtail

    in Macro

          5

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    Great capture, beautifully done. My only critique would be that I wish the bottom of the wing wasn't slightly cut off. I also think you could bring the saturation (and possibly the exposure) up the tiniest bit to really bring out his colors.
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    Untitled

    in Portrait

          2

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    For a school-type portrait it's very well done. I would edit out the piece of hair over her eye and the bright piece on the right of her face. I would leave it like that if you are going for a standard, JC Penny-type portrait - she's gorgeous and the puppy is cute! To bring it more to the artsy/unique side I would play around with B&W conversions, or leave it in color and boost the saturation and contrast a bit.
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    Untitled

    in Portrait

          3

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    I really like the idea of it - it looks like a photo from the 30s or 40s, but the flash is very, very harsh. Were you using direct, on-camera flash? If so, I'd look into diffusing and/or bouncing it to soften those shadows and spread the flash out.
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    Untitled

    in Landscape

          3

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    I also like this a lot. Beautiful image. I can't tell if it's just the way I'm holding my laptop, but the horizon line doesn't look straight - I would correct that if it's crooked.
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    B/W for...What a nice cigarette!

    in Portrait

          6

    Posted

    GREAT picture! The lighting and composition is perfect and you really get a sense of the subject. If anything, I'd consider cloning out the rectangles in the background on the lower left - they're a bit distracting. But really lovely overall.
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    Untitled

    in Family

          3

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    As much as it looks posed, it's actually not. Josie was present when

    I was photographing her mom and dad's engagement pictures, and this

    was taken while she was waiting in the wings watching us get some pics

    of just the two of them.

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    Untitled

    in Landscape

          3

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    I like this a lot! I would take out the person in the water as he's a bit distracting from the great forms of the two running figures and their fantastic shadows. You captured the perfect positions!
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    in Landscape

          5

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    Maybe brighten the sky and/or water a tiny bit...definitely crop or clone out the edge of the wall or whatever the orange thing is to the right...it's hard for me to tell on my laptop because I could just be holding it crooked, but definitely make sure the horizon line is level too.
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    Untitled

    in Portrait

          9

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    I agree this is a great portrait. I'm not a fan of the background color though - I don't really think it adds to the picture or really makes him (or his gorgeous eyes) pop. I think this picture would look great with a high-contrast, high saturation treatment like a Dave Hill or Joey Lawrence to really bring out his eyes and the texture of his skin and beard.

     

    Great picture!

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    in Studio

          2

    Posted

    Great picture, great post processing on it as well. I do wish the man was either to the left or the right and not directly in the center of the frame, though.
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