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    Flower

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    i was taken with a 105 micro Nikkor, on a tripod @ f13 about. Should be sharp. But I think I see what you mean about the texture, it looks a bit flat.Ill retake it, if the flowers near my house are still blooming and see if I cant get it with more detail.

    Flower

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    Comments are welcome! If you give me a low rating, please be nice and

    explain why, it's the only way to improve.

  1. Hi!

    I like this one better than the one with the girl. Here the lighting gives a better effect. Also in this one the books are less defined, and I did not concentrate on them. In the other image, the way the books are set up, are distracting and more prop like, rather than giving it the "up to her eyes in work" effect. But then again, I am no portrait expert.

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    Nice contrasty subject.

    I think the lighting could be much better on the left side. You have a naturally contrasty subject, why shadow the left side?

    I also think the amp only detracts, I feel the guitar solo, would be nicer.

     

     

    Longing

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    Comments welcome!

    I know the 'single color point in BW' is done a lot, but I really felt

    this cried out for it. Do you think it works?

    Svasso

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    Hi there,

    I love the colors you captured, but I don't like the distracting background. The eye kind of travels between the subject and background. In this case it might be hard to photoshop it out because of the reflection.

     

    This just reminds us how important it is to notice your background when making the shot :).

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