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    Brian,

     

    This is an interesting concept, here's a few things that I'd try. Move your lighting so that her legs are not overexposed. It's hard to see her face and the difference between the two is distracting. I'd also try some sort of diffusion on the light to make it more even.

     

    Cheers

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    in Nude and Erotic

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    Tana,

     

    Overall a very nice shot. I would have moved the framing a bit further over so that her spine was right along the edge of the picture. I also might have tried draping her hair down her back instead of around her neck, or at least made sure it was combed and neat looking.

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    Very good work. You don't need a lot of fancy equipment to make great pictures. One or two lights, a few large pieces of black and white felt and a good model will take you very far. Have fun experimenting and only add equipment when you find a specific need.

     

    I'd love to see more from this series.

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    Untitled

    in Nude and Erotic

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    Interesting pose and I like the expression on her face. Everything except her face seems just a touch out of focus. Maybe this is intentional but I find it a bit distracting.
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