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    Untitled

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    Hi Mihai, the composition looks good to me. The repetition of the squares in different sizes does it. To focus more attraction to the picture I would frame it.

    Good work..

  1. Hi Matt, your where in a lucky location to manage this shoot. From my perspective there are some points to improve the picture.

    a) You should correct the perspective (falling edges) of the skyscraper.

    b) A frame would give the picture more focus.

     

     

    "In Your Face"

          3
    I like the picture but it would be even better (inhmo) if there would more space around the head. Furthermore a border would also improve the impression of the picture.

    Floating snow

          2

    It seemns that the snow is floating caused by the strong wind

    conditions during a ski tour in Alps (Switzerland).

    Comments are appreciated (I am not sure if this is the right category

    but lets try)

    Buzzard land

          2
    I think the focus should be on the bird (at least from my point of view). Currently it plays only a minor role in the picture as the background dominates the scenery. I would try to crop the bird and remove the background in this way.

    Bavaria

          5
    The picture is well coloured provides a real natural feeling of the location. The small little thing I would mention is that the tree in the lower left corner interferes a little bit with the of depth of the picture. But all in all at impressive shoot.

    Look Up

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    You had the right idea to take this picture especially the light provides good feeling. The grey border is from my point of view a little bit too large as it takes the concentration away. Furthermore I could imagine if the pillars weren't cut in the middle of the picture it would be even more impressiv.

    Mogan Lake

          8
    The picture is good but the dark area interferes with rest. I think if you would crop the image without the shawdow the impression of the picture would gain.

    Untitled

          3
    The idea of the composition idea looks quite well to me but in total the picturce is too dark. I suppose if would try to push the picture in a HDR way you will gain more in the way as it should be (at least from my perspective).

    Architecture

          1

    I took this shot at the Millennium square in Chicago. I tried to

    combine the mixed architecture with vanishing point at the top of the

    building.

    Any comment is appreciated

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