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sfriesinger

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  1. The light of the mid build is done quit well. The build at the left suffers  a bit from the low light. Furthermore the left building has falling lines.If the vertical lines would be corrected I would go for a almost very good shoot.

    Untitled

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    I find the perspective quite good but in general the image is a bit to dark. Form my point of view the horizontal line disturbs the central image direction. Without this line I would go for a almost very good composition

    Speedramps

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    Well done composition. From my perspective it is bit unbalanced with the stairway on the left and the light at the right side. I know a good balance is is hard to achive here would give the picture the final kick.

    Frozzen trees

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    Tried to catch the iced trees. The picture seems to be unsettled at

    the first view. Looking at it for a longer time a detailed

    structure seems to be appear.

    Thanks for looking at it. Comments are appreciated

    Sky tubes

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    I tried to catch the black and white contrast which supports the

    perspective (At least in my oppinion)

    Comments and critiques are appreciated. Thanks for viewing.

  2. I like the composition of the shoot. All the different parts form the balloons makes the picture. Unfortunately I see a some artifacts around the balloon I suppose they are caused by the sharpening process.

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    Well done. Your shoot provide a good impression of the scenery. The colours and tonality is well balanced.

    A small comment (IMO)would be that the white frame moves the point of attractions aways fromt the picture. Have you triedto use a black one.

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    The picture gives a really good feeling of space and colour at that day in the mountain. The only thing I want to mention rg presentation of the picture is that the horizont tends to the left.

    Roses

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    I like the composition of the picture but let me bring in some comments which could improve the impression a bit more.

    - Light balance is different from left to the right which brings in an a-symmetrical perspective.

    - At the right site the roses are cut in the center which adds a shift in the symmetry to the image focus.

     

     

  3. Of course just another sunset picture. I found it interessting

    because of the already gone sun the light still provides a silent and

    smooth scenery.

    Thanks for viewing and for comments.

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