markarichards

Michael,

First let me say I like the subject and always like black and white, I agree that it needs more contrast or color. I DO like the way the cloud pattern plays off of the patterns in the dunes. In fact, maybe if you cropped out about half of the foreground it would even out the three different patterns present in the foreground, dunes and clouds. Just my humble amateur opinion.

Mark

Jacynthe,

Great close up! I understand what I think you were trying to do with the flowers in the back ground, but they may be distracting from your original subject, the moth. Maybe you could do a closer crop on the moth and the leaf and see if that's a bit stronger. Just my humble amateur opinion. Mark

Austin looks like quite a character, and I think the collage is great. If I had to say anything it would be that the first frame looks a bit familiar to the third frame. Maybe, leave one out and just use three frames, It would still be a great collage. Just my humble amateur opinion.

Mark

Jaun,

I agree with you. As an amateur, I'm here to learn, and a bum rating with out an explanation is just being mean, in my opinion.

Sarah,

I'm not a professional, so take what I say with a grain of salt. I think this is a nice photo but could be cropped into two seperate very nice photos. One could be the two men and the boy and two could be the girl with the baby. Just my opinion