jukka1

I think this is exceptional shot in every way.

Composition is very strong and the main point is in the face. I also like tones of the picture - they are light but not too light.

One thing I miss and it is that there could be more contrast in the face. The main light should be little bit stronger from left or right. But it is only my opinion. I'll rate it 6/7.

Sincerely, Jukka

Critiques and comments welcome.

Sincerely, Jukka

Thank for commenting my photo.

I think this is very good photograph. Tones are just perfect and it is very strong composition. I would really like to see in real paper. I also like your child pictures. I think they are fresh and personal. I have a feeling that children like them too.

Sincerely, Jukka

You have managed to combine the past and the trend. Model's pose is 'trendy' but your technique is like one of old masters. You are excellent darkroom worker, the picture has all shades from total black to white. Lighting is also exellent, the model comes out very good and there is just right amount of black around the main subject. However, there could be more light on the jeans, they tend to disappear. Anyway, I'll give this 7/6

Regards, Jukka

Perfect picture. Composition, light, everything!

Regards, Jukka

I like the composition and light in this picture.

All the lines take eye to the white area and also boat is going there 6/6.

Regards, Jukka

I like almost everything in this picture.

I think those sharp edges in the stones contrast woman's 'round' shapes is very good idea. The composition is also very strong and everything is in place. The picture is also technically very good. I will look at this picture many times!

7/7