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fotografya

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    Street Didge.....

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    or something spelled near to that I think. Am I right? Some Sleep Laboratories advice this device for the ones with sleep-apnea synd. Very well documented street scene. Congratulations... MF

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    I don't want to be offensive, but I dislike underage nudism in photography... I hope your model is legal....

    piazza

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    Well, the scene seems to be ok at least. Very well organized street shot infact. The thing bothers the eye, is the postprocessing method you've chosen.While working the image on PS (or any other editor) , you over handled the shadows and highlights. Therefore, the sky stands individually distracting in your scene. If you focus your eye at the sharp end of the structures(i.e. buildings roof border), you will see a white halo which increases this artifact. Another thing to notice is maybe ( I'm not quite sure of that) the unsharping process that is overloaded to the scene. Sometimes less is more. MF

    Untitled

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    Vertical landscape idea works well here.Appropiate DoF helps you to improve the scene.I don't know about your equipment but, auto-batching may help to obtain adequate exposure. Congratulations.... MF

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    Happy face fits well for the theme. B&W did the rest of the job. More contrast with less highlights would give an unique look. Congratulations... MF

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    B&W here, hits the bull in the eye. The vignetting effect improves the scene (maybe they're corners on a table, don't know). All I wish is that, there was more plain on the left side. Actually good work... MF

    Untitled

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    Good idea with a different angle of view.All of the subjects are playing their role well in the frame. Maybe a bit , less PS would improve more. Congratulations...MF
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