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todd palmer

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    Edge

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    I agree with Bryan's comment - is a crop possible - also a crop might draw your eye more toward the light fixture at the top. I'd be tempted to put the light fixture just a little below centerline. Good shot!

    souk, marrakech

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    A good pattern shot. Like that the rack gives the red cast to everything. Wonder the empty slot should have either been cropped out, or moved closer to the center of the frame. Feel like it should either be more or less conspicuous.

    Zen

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    Think your placement of the ball is just right & I like the simple geometric shapes. Can't shake the feeling that something is not quite right, but I can't figure our what it is. Sky is very simple, but maybe you didn't want to add more color. Maybe a slight angle change to eliminate the side of the cube... That would make it more 2-dimensional. I would go back and try some more shots.
  1. Simple shot exploring the colors. Working on improving my

    composition. Specifically here, choosing the right amount of

    foreground and correct placement of the door in the frame.

    Increased saturation slightly.

     

    Your comments and suggestions greatly appreciated.

    Abstract 2

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    A building I found interesting in the La Defense section of Paris.

    Concrete hatchwork covering a steel and glass form - houses a casino.

     

    Criticism welcome!

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