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    Thanks Marc Aubry, Sherry and Tracie for nice words!

     

    Especially thanks Marc G. for your advice - I completely agree with you.

     

    To be honest I know that usually, the weakness of my photos is exactly the framing , but I think the success will come with more routine.

     

    I appreciate very much your feedback guys.

    I'll continue making portraits, hopefully better than this and post comments to your pictures, if I see something, that can improve your works.

     

    Best regards,Iavor

    My Brother

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    Definitly perfect work with the skin and light - the image has increadible character.

    One of the best! Congradulations, Bill !

    A lot of your images have special dignity, which I like and here it's very strong!

    Only the white in the shirt is that bothers me. Regards,Iavor

    Shelly

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    Very nice job William!

     

    Graphic high key, beautiful composed, nice mood here, the frame and the eyes work well together. Eyes are over 2/3 of high of the frame, which also add some dignity. May be worth to see more the eyelashes - it will contribute to the model character.

     

    Best regards Bill and thanks again for your comments on my photos, Iavor

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    Thank you William for nice comment. I know that I'm addicted to tight composition and like to enter in the subject of picting as much as I can, this way may be I'm on the edge sometimes. Regards, Iavor
  1. Fantastic work here!!!

    My favorite image from this series since now. Love the color, the girl's look and for sure the way light coming form above: reflection in the fish and the metallic glitter on the top edge of the sword.

    after the end .1

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    Really nice image!!! Everything works well for the idea - color, light, composition. It makes me return to see it again several times. For sure, one of the best recent images in photo.net Only I would prefer here horizontal format- to cut some from above. May be this is only my view.

    Is it a true image, or there is some Photoshop work? But, anyway 6/7 from me.

    Regards, Iavor

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    Thanks Mark,

    I agree with you. It was only a try in PH to emphasis the hand gesture. The original was with more equal light, which I think also was better, although she has some darker face skin.

    Regards,Iavor

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    Dear Mark,

     

    many thanks for spending time and your constructive critique. This is actually what I really need on this image. Probably it's a cliche, but these comments cost more than any ratings.I agree with you about everything what you said. Not to excuse myself, but add some clarity please see some details below:

    With this young girl I worked for the first time and it was lunch time, hot shiny sun, no clouds. So, I choose place with more shadows. We had 10 minutes to make pictures - for me very short time to get in connection with the model. She impressed me with her look - beauty and dignity.

    I choosed this picture to publish, not because it was the best, but has more dramatic look and add some mistery. I thought this will add to the adea of her apperance. After reading your opinion and look again on the picture - you are right, there is too much contrast and shiny spots. To get more background I set speed to 1/60 and aperture to f 6.3 to have focus on both eyes and ask model not to move. When I check in a large size - no considerable lack of focus, but it's true that in studio with 1/200 this result will be better. The funny part is with the position of the light source - I asked a friend to hold it in a position.

    So, I know, that in studio, where I have more experience, or with more time and thinking, such pictures could be times better. But for me was very important to see what impression will make this picture on other photographers.

     

    Best regards,Iavor

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