airgead

Archetecture isn't my thing but that is a striking shot. I like it.

Love it.

This file is WAY too big to review properly. It doesn't fit a single screen.

Lighning is hard to shoot well. There is a lot of empty sky and dark foreground in this shot. All I can suggest is waiting for more than one strike if possible so there is a bit more going on.

Lovely

Very nice. You may want to try burning in the very top eddge a little as the lightness there tends to draw the eye but that's being pretty nitpicky.

Nice concept. I can't decide whether I would like the 'stem' in focus or not

Interesting.

Lovely pattern on the water.

 

Is the orange natural or filtered?

Lovely. Nice abstract. Was this part of a series or a one off? I would love to see more.

As the title says - one hour old.

 

Hospital fluro lighting. Todak TMZ3200.

 

Comments greatly appreciated.

 

Dave

A little known (and littler visited) set of falls about a half hours

rock scramble/wade from the main falls.

 

There are some untidy branches in the falls but I didn't feel like

risking life and limb to remove them.

 

Comments very much appreciated

 

Dave

Taken standing on slippery moss-covered rocks in the middle of the

river. I must be mad.

 

Velvia, 1/4s exposure f/22

 

It has come out very blue but I think that works here. I'll take my

warming filter next time (when the drought breaks and the river is

flowing again).

 

Comments appreciated

 

Thanks

Dave

The image is a bit bit to easily view on screen. Other than that there is some lens flare at the top. I'm not sure what you are shooting - the clouds or the water as the horizon is dead centre. I would crop off the top so it is more like 1/3 sky and 2/3 water as the water to me is the more interesting part of the image. that would also get rid of the lens flare. You could even crop the sky out altogether and just leave the refection of the sky in the water.

I'd try cropping some of the empty space above and maybe some of the LHS - to where most of the trails end.

Nice. The face is obscured by the shadow (yours?). I would try to move out of the light as much as possible.

 

The bright spot on the floor is distracting. You could tone it down in photoshop (or in the darkroom)

Try shooting this while there is still a bit of light in the sky. It will mean you get the lights but the background isn't so heavy and black.

You might want to leave a little more room above her hair at the top of the frame. To me it looks a little cramped.

Could just be my monitor but some of the big dark areas are a little overpowering

Could just be my monitor but some fill from the lower left to lighten those dark shadows would probably make a diference.

I like the concept but the reflection in the shades possibly needs to stand out more. I had a hard time working out what it was.

Taken when my daughter was 1 day old.

 

For the technical people out there - Window light, Ilford Delta3200.

Scan is from a print on Agfa MG fibre base paper. Original neg was

fairly low contrast so printed at grade 3 1/2.

Lovely

Aurora photos are hard to get right. You've done well with this one. The only thing to watch is the horizon is not straight and you seem to have some flare from another light source on the bottom left.