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jean-louis

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Image Comments posted by jean-louis

  1. because the middle cable,the wall and the white flash,draw the look at the post.

    the other cable is not necessary (for my oppinion).

     

    i'm persuade if you have'nt this, the look are draw at left by the middle cable and return at right by the shadows and the man blow up in the image,more dramatic effect.

     

    at the present the look are jam by the post(for my oppinion).

     

    PS:I'see your post,excuse me if i hurt your feelings,it is'nt my desire !!

     

     

    JLC

     

    Untitled

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    is not realy a photo, is a composition !! is visible at middle right and at the light left for trees, right for the cloud but is a good joob; the harshnes some elements and the sweetness some nature.

    School 9 bus

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    sujet not easy !!

     

    i just think the top is missing, maybe is not a big probleme but the shadows have'nt story.

     

    this photo have a good look (visual)

  2. maybe the environment is more present and no important for your story,you can restrain at the model.

    i think the expretion is good "she is very angry", the various red shad(hair,robe,table)are good.

    Pathan

          49

    hello

     

    i like this visage and your ligthing,the texture of image is very good, i'thing is the more beautyful photo some this serie

     

    JLC

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