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    Relax

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    Maurizio:

    As usually you mastered the light very well here. I also like the pose a lot, including the fact that she does not look into the camera.

     

    Well done.

     

    The one part I think could be a tad better: It is framed very harsh on her backside - give it a bit more space there!

     

    Well, I think...

     

    :-)

  1. This is one of the view where one of my flashguns did not trigger, so

    I got a very strange and uneven light.

    I thought that the pose and the shadow (which was created by accident,

    to be honest) are still quite effective.

    So I conversted it using SilverEfecs and in there the Kodak TriX

    simulation.

  2. Dennis - many thanks to your comment.

    Indeed, the lower part is quite dark. It is dark on purpose, but it may well be too dark. This was shot when uploaded and post processed using a (fairly good) laptop display. Although this is calibrated, it is nowhere near to a real monitor...

     

    So indeed it might be my fault - thanks for pointing it out!

  3. I like the eye contact. I find the pose ok and that you took that looking down on her has it's sense, I guess.

    My problem here is the sepia - respectively the lack of contrast, which is often caused by sepia. I simply would love to see it more punchy

    Deena

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    This is one of those... not much to say: Take a nice girl, a talented photographer, perfect light and a nice / alluring pose - wht you get is this. Close to perfect!

    Japan

          1

    This is a bad shot.

    I happened to see this model in a Kimono in the middle of the bamboo

    forrest. She was shooting with a pro.

     

    I just raised the camera and fired - a matter of fractions of a

    second, as they were about to move on.

     

    Unfortunately I just had my small G10 with me and at ISO 200 the

    shutter speed was too slow and I have shake blurr all over...

     

    But I thought wouw - this is such a strong image (contend wise), I

    give it a try: Converted very soft on purpose, made some other tweaks

    and tried to give it a dreamy rather than unsharp expression.

     

    What do you feel?

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