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joe_marsh

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  1. Hi Mike. Thanks you for taken the time to review my picture. You have done a very good job in bringing in much more detail. The image has much more punch in it. Thanks again and best regards. Joe

  2. You did well in PS regarding editing and adding the texture. One thing maybe in my opinion you could have done to really show how big the onion was. A ruler by the side or, something that the viewer knows the size of it. You know how big it was but the viewer doesn’t.  Hope this will help for next time. Regards.

    Sedimentation

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    To appreciate this picture to the full one must click on it to see the large version. Unique composition, great light and colours. Overall a very good photo.  Well done Ray.  Joe

  3. Hi Deb, maybe if you can clone out the hair strands on top LHS (background area) and on the Mother’s eye you would improve this great image even further. Lighting, skin tones and the B & W conversion are very good. Regards.

    Moment in Life

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    Thanks Charles for your comment. Had a long break due to everyday commitments. Hopefully I will have some time to start taking some new stuff again. Regards.

    DSC_0088

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    Very good concept. Agree with the above comment. Maybe you could have used a reflector to reflect some light back to her face. Regards, Joe

    Attitude

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    Hi DC, Beautiful eyes and nice portrait. Only thing is that you moved too close to her face and that made her head looking much bigger compared to the neck and rest of her body. Hope that helps. Regards.

    j1862_35

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    Hi Siamak, I like the idea of placement of the model but, there are couple of things that in my opinion you can do to improve this picture. Maybe, if you can show more of her eyes and also try not to, divide her face with her nose. Eyes should be the focus on a portrait. Regards.

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