I like the overall effect that you are going for. I would've like to seen more of the model, the legs perhaps. It kinda make the model cut off, especially near the bottom of the dress. With the lines in the sofa and pillow, having seen the legs would've provide more flow to the eye. As well the left arm is a littl awk ward. The break tends to disturb the flow of the body. I would've like to seen other shots with the model facing towards the left.
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I like the overall effect that you are going for. I would've like to seen more of the model, the legs perhaps. It kinda make the model cut off, especially near the bottom of the dress. With the lines in the sofa and pillow, having seen the legs would've provide more flow to the eye. As well the left arm is a littl awk ward. The break tends to disturb the flow of the body. I would've like to seen other shots with the model facing towards the left.
Otherwise very good.