al smith
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client wanted a snowstorm in the studio
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Why is it photographers kids are the ones that HATE their photo being
taken, I was allowed 4 frames to test a new light, just love this one, she
does not lol in fact she wanted me to delete them LOL.
please comment about the picture OR if your children like or hate their
picture being taken, i would be very interested :) thanks for looking.
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Hi
very nice portrait great feeling in the eyes, great mouth shape, good light too
Now for the Critique
The background behind her shoulder draws the eye away from the subject if it was the same as above her head it would have been better but a minor point
The left hand i feel distracts from the composition may be if it had been laid flat on the surface she lays on, when a hand is square to the lens it just looks so large, square and "manly", i always try and have a hand edge on or 45 degree angled to minimize this
and last one is personal taste i would have removed the bra strap by ether PS or asking the model just to drop the strap from her shoulder for the shot (beware sometimes this leaves a skin mark that you have to remove in PS anyway)
I am sorry I truly like the picture but i could not show one of my clients if things like these glare at me :) and my picture may not have been any better that you one here buts that's what i would have tried to do
dont hate me :)
_al
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thanks for looking
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Nothing like a subject that does not want his photo taken but his mother
insists lol
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Thanks Tony, this was right at the end of the session and she was in her Dads arms, she was a lot worse that this prior to the photo.
lots of shots for my "CryBaby" album there heheheh
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Thank you Caro :)
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This beautiful little lady never smiles ONCE throughout the whole family
shoot LOL, but the Mum and Dad loved this one
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some for my latest few clients
Thanks for looking
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very nice well done
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your an Evil man Chuck Carr .... but made me laugh :)
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"My Baby" thats what he calls his new bike :) he is a bit sad that way
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Rob and new baby ;)
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Rob and new baby ;)
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Dressage this weekend
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Gridiron in the UK
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Gridiron in the UK
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Thunder (white) vs Blitz (blue)
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