zoe-36

and who's to say she wont :)

comments welcome

Zoe, facially, has every chance of making a great model, but IMHO, you have done her no favours in this image...........

My critisisms are as follows...........

Your crop at the top is a touch too severe, in that the current image suggests a little "baldness" in the hairline. In reality I'm sure this is not the case, but my observation is such.

Your apparent creativity in the eye highlights comes across as rather "ghoulish"(sp) and in the larger view the "whites" are really overdone....

This is a great Halloween image.... if that is what you were after....... but your caption refered to Zoe "wanting to be a model", yet her redeeming attributes - the eyes - have been played with, and rather unsuccessfully.

Just my observations and thoughts..................

Regards

To Graham's comments, I would add the following. At f3.5, you have only one eye in sharp focus, and you are losing texture in the skin. Her hair is unnaturally dark on the lower half of the image.