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This was my first official photo shoot where I picked the topic

(zombies - although she may look a bit more like an undead witch), set

the direction, etc. I was going to dark, shadowy and creepy -- thus

the parking garage for the locale. I used two external flashes for

some hard light, one to the subject's right and one to the subject's left.

 

Looking for comments/critiques as I'm always looking to improve!

Thanks for taking the time.

That's my hometown, and you did a great job with the shot! I'm torn on whether keeping the light on the right was a good idea or not. It draws the eye towards it, which isn't really the subject of the photo. However, it looks cool how you can see it illuminating the Falls, so it's a tough call. Either way, nice job!

I'm still very new to photography and always looking to learn. Any

suggestions on how to improve this photo would be appreciated.

Pointing out what I did well is appreciated as well! :) I know most

posts don't get any critiques, so I'll take what I can get. Thanks!

I took this picture from the stands at an NLL lacrosse game a couple

of days ago. I wish that photographer wasn't in the shot, but other

than that I think it's a pretty cool shot, considering the arena was

dark and I was in the stands. :)

 

Any suggestions for improving this shot for the next game I go to

would be great!

Here's a picture of my cat. She was getting annoyed at having her

picture taken so frequently that day. :)

 

I'd appreciate any comments/critiques to help me get better. Thanks.

I'd appreciate feedback on this photo -- I took it over the 4th of

July holiday and I think it captures the relazed nature of fishing in

nature. I'd love to hear comments on how I could make the picture

better -- either from the actual camera or using photo software (I use

PSP). Thanks for looking!

I'd love to get some constructive criticism on this (ratings are good

too, but words are better). I took this long exposure on the balcony

of a cruise ship on my vacation to Hawaii. It's around 9pm or so and

is pitch black -- leaving the shutter open for so long makes it look

more like dusk. Overall, I really like this picture but am looking

for feedback on how I could've made it better.

 

Thanks for looking!

Nobody has any suggestions on how to make a picture like this look better? :(

I want to try taking some lightning shots one of these days, as they look very cool.

 

The only minor complaint I have about this one I think the colored circles in the middle of the picture are a bit distracting. Otherwise, very good job!

This guy hopped on my office window, so I took a picture figuring you

don't get a chance to take the picture of the underside of an insect

very often. I had to use manual focus, as the AF didn't work

properly. The other settings are auto.

 

Let me know what you think, and also what suggestions for improvement

in the future (or with photo editing software) you have. Thanks!

This photo doesn't do much for me. To my untrained eye, it looks like a shot taken at night without a tripod... It doesn't look organized or intentional at all. The "bars" on the right and left of the frame look out of place as well. Overall, I just don't like it. Sorry :(

I like this picture a lot. The colors look almost unnaturally vibrant - almost like they're some sort of energy field going across the device. Captured the colors wonderfully, nice job.

I like the eyes -- they draw you in. Did you do anything in post? If so, care to share your technique?

The ball is VERY difficult to see. In fact, I wouldn't have noticed it at all if I wasn't looking for it (based on the title of the photo). I'm not sure if you could make it stand out more in PS (or PSP), without making it look too "fake."

 

It's not really capturing the excitement of the sport, IMHO. I don't have any suggestions on how to do that (as I can't do it myself...).

 

Overall, room for improvement but a decent photo.

This picture is awesome -- great job!

I realize that this photo isn't very original. However, I think it

captured the moment very well - room full of strangers, clinging to

the blanket, but still relaxed and curious about his surroundings.

I'd be interested in comments and suggestions, especially for low

marks. I can't improve if people don't give their opinions! :)

Thank you very mcuh for the comment, I appreciate it!

 

The reason that you see the grid (instead of a regular blur) is because the picture was taken through a window screen from my office. The grid is the actual screen. I could try to smoothen it out with PSP, but I'm not sure how to do that yet. I definately agree with you on that though.

Very original and great looking. The effect of the eyes is very cool, although a different color may make it more engaging. Nicely done!

This is my first contribution to Photo.net, but don't go easy on me -

you only learn by being critiqued!