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jon_robert

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    Mad Man

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    I like just about everything about it. But the chicken wire then ruins it.  If it were mine I would spend the time in Photoshop getting rid of the chicken wire.

    All Roads

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    Because I have no idea what this photo is of. I lose interest very fast and move on.  Perhaps a clue incorporated into the composition would keep my attention longer.

    Untitled

          6

    I would love to see another one where the left edge of the crop is right if front of the couple. Begging the question - what are they walking into. We would see where they have been but not what are they walking into.  In this one we see where they are going but not where they have been.

  1. I like it. I would probably love it if the mountains were cropped out. The bottom right 2/3 is where I see the best composition.  Use the scroll bar at the right to crop off the top half of the mountains and imagine the left 1/3 cropped off.  Doing so creates more mystery and  unanswered questions.

    Marsh Reeds

          4
    I would copy the background gold color and use it to replace the back ground green via the clone tool. The green distracts from your awesome forground

    Untitled

          2
    I like it but I don't. I see a staged photo. I see her head clashing with some horizontal thing. I think the concept is promising but it is not yet there for my taste. The verticals are also not vertical. Making them plumb would also help. Others may not notice these. I guess it is individual taste.

    CEREMONY

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    I like it. I would probably love it if the vertical lines were made to be vertical. Camera correction in Photoshop elements 5.0 would do it. Image align etc. I might get rid of that splotch left center or move it to look like coming out of the more foreground vertical just in front of the "smoke stack" it is coming out of.

    Untitled

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    If it was not quite such a 45ish degree angle I might entertain thoughts that I'm looking through glass at rain. This would lead to many more mental gymnastics. Is it glass? Dirty glass? Frosted glass? Is it rain? Is it a fake? Right now I immediately conclude a fake and move on.

    Untitled

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    Make a copy but with a very bright white and washed out border, replacing the black one. Here the photo sucks in on it self like old age death. The white I think would cause it to explode with the energy and eternal optimism of youth
  2. Very nice but disturbing somewhat. The horizon does not sit well. Perhaps leveling it would improve the imparted emotional impact. Sometimes I deliberately tilt the horizon for good effect but here I don't like the tilt.
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