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paul swenson

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    As others have pointed out, she has an amazing body - maybe too amazing (I can't believe I'm saying that). The light sculpting the figure is wonderful. The angel of the arm up over the face seems awkward, though I can see what you are going for, the piercing gaze, the sense of mystery. Maybe the stunning beauty of the model is a distraction to creating the mood you are looking for...?

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    Very creative shot. Composition, placement of the door-having to peek around the corner- and the choice to distort the door all add to the mystery and intrigue of this shot. The curved lines of the door versus the straight lines of the walls, the choice of black and white all add up here. This simple image has a lot going for it.

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    This has the potential to be a very good environmental portrait. I think her expression is lacking something, and the lighting is too hard. Direct overhead lighting would be more intimate and dramatic, in my opinion. Perhaps you had no control over that, and were working with what was there. Anyway, keep it up.
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