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zhimmelm

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  1. I agree with your comments...I always prefer constructive critiques.

    I really like this landscape shot. It has nice foreground light and I like how it fades darker to blue in the back, giving it atmospheric perspective. I wish the sky/clouds at the top was slightly darker. It might be a little blown out. Overall, I think it is a beautiful shot. I really enjoyed the other two in your portfolio as well.

    -Z

    JC

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    I think it is a very original image. I think I would like it better if the black wall on the left was cropped out. It think it is somewhat distracting as it looks like it should be part of the frame. Other than that, I really like it.

    -Zak

    Untitled

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    This is a really interesting and unique senior photo. I have never seen one like this, and I really like it. The contrast on the subject is spot on. I do agree with the comment above that the brightness on the far left is a little distracting. Maybe if you cropped it slightly and then burned in a little. Definitely don't lose the brick wall, though, because it gives it great depth. Overall, I think it is a very creative portrait.

    -Zak

    H & C

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    I think you did a great job with this composite. Great coloring and contrasts. I think the composition of the shot could have better, maybe having more contextual detail. Also, the cropping seems a little off. I think it might be because her chin is cut off a little. With that being said, I think that this a unique piece of art and a very noble effort, especially being your first.

    All the best,

    Zak

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