jochenvaneden

I like this shoot. My wish her just a little bit more to the right and on the left more from the board. Only a suggestion.

Very good. Perhaps her nose and the ball are to bright.

Overall a good photo, but the highlights at his hand and face are to strong and it seems to be burned crossing the whole photo. The shadows aren't strong enought. Contrast?

Greetings,

Jochen

Thank you all so much for your comments!

Well, again the halo around the person. For my opinion it has to be much more softer.

There's much contact in the photo. Nice lines and the round glas is breaking the them. Very good!

A surreal mood. The enviroment interesting.

Hello Frank,

but there's only this bw version. The coloured is another one. :)

Thank you!

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@Ken: I think you can hear especially in the music that there is no disharmony. ;) The school desk has no meaning, at least for me not. In the final cover-version it has been croped.

@Steve: Especially the hair was one of the reasons why I choose this photo. I love it. :)

Thank you!

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