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ilkka_nissila

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  1. The tower is a few degrees off vertical, consider rotating the image to fix it. The bushes on the left obstruct the main subject (you might shoot from a clearer viewpoing) and the light is not flattering. I would try to shoot a more close-up of the tower surface on a sunny day in side lighting to bring out the texture of the facade.

    Bridalveil Falls

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    I think the scene is overly complicated. As if by magic, you've managed to get all the areas of the image to fit in the dynamic range. A mountain, blue sky with clouds, falls, creek, rocks, and a rainbow ... too much for one image.
  2. It's nice compositionally but the lighting could be better. It's too contrasty and the shot is overexposed. Slide film is better suited for flower photography as then you have control over exposure.
  3. Having seen some of your slides in real life, they're top quality. These scans don't do justice to your originals at all. What kind of JPEG settings do you use, and do you set the focus point manually in the scanner software? I think the scans could be a lot sharper - and subsequent prints, too.

    Untitled

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    I like those leaves with the raindrops a lot. Maybe you could have moved the camera a bit forward and concentrate the picture on those plants; the foreground is like a different subject.

    Untitled

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    I think the colours are great. The depth of field could be a bit better. A tripod is something to use in every flower shot !

     

    I think you could also leave some (empty) space around the main subject, otherwise the picture looks a bit "crowded".

    Come Together

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    I think the shot has excellent composition and use of colour. Only thing that I'd change is I'd like to have a smaller person on the right (and perhaps move him slightly to the left). Btw., I think the proposed competing shots would be binned at the light table. The boy is dead center, and there is no light to speak of. The shot with the pointing finger is just too obvious "advertising to people with IQ < 80". Nothing personal.
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