mohsens

December 26, 2006

This is very nice with beautiful warm tones. but there are some problems.

first your horizon is indirect. then, you would better crop the free space on top to improve your composition. having such subject in the middle, in my humble opinion is not correct. though nice. Cheers.

December 13, 2006

Good work, but colors should be better vivid.

December 13, 2006

Nice shot, however lacks sharpness.

December 10, 2006

The second crop is better but I'm thinking about something like this :

December 8, 2006

This is very beautiful. As friends mentioned, the light is very good. Iso 800 with a small lamp, great. and IMHO about the composition, I think it would be better having her more on left. I mean having lesser from the left area and adding more space on right.

December 8, 2006

Nice colors as always. good details and sharpness.

December 3, 2006

This one has a nice composition, however I would like to have more of the boat in the screen. about a half. though nice. 5/6

November 28, 2006

I like the composition. would like to have vivid colors.

November 27, 2006

Nice work, I would like to focus on the anchor and have the boat out of DOF.

November 27, 2006

Good work. I like the concept. But needs more sharpness.

November 19, 2006

Nice work, composition's not bad but could be better adding more free space on top. so you could also have an aspect ratio of 3/4. though nice. well done.

November 12, 2006

I prefer the BW version, however a sepia would be better.

October 29, 2006

Would be very better with a white simple border.

October 28, 2006

Nice DOF. Good in black and white. well done Ali.

October 24, 2006

I like this one better. Great composition. I like the softness of the photo. Very good that it's not so sharp. Cheers.

Dary kam kam ye chizi mishia. :))

October 23, 2006

nice shot. may be you've focused on the text yourself but IMHO if there was focus on the front of the pen would be better.

October 23, 2006

Simple and great also. Very nice. I like the sepia here.

October 23, 2006

I like photos with a simple background. so is this photo. Cheers.

October 22, 2006

Good idea, nice done. 1st: the name KART is not known for foreigners. 2nd: IMO could be better lower the camera and have the view from lower height. Regards.