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intriguing photo; recommend cropping top and right sides for more dramatic effect
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a very touching and beautiful duo shot (or should I say trio); nice settting with beach and rocks in the backdrop; to make the photo more dramatic I would recommend having one of the figures look up (either at the other or at the viewer); I also recommend having the man place both hands on the woman's hands or womb to complement her two hands)
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(by the way I love Fuji Fine Pix cameras); this is a very nice head shot set in dramatic lighting; for future head shots like this, I would recommend turning the face slightly towards the light source (lamp in this photo) to get more direct light onto the face; placing the figure closer to the lamp would also make it more dramatic and fill the empty gap between lamp and face
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a very graceful and beautiful head shot; very nice pose, especially with the prominence of the hands in a very graceful gesture; top portion of the photo is distracting and mainly empty space; the photo would work better as a tightly cropped head shot including the elbows and a slight portion of the piano; for future head shots, recommend raising the eyes slightly to allow for more light to highlight the eyes
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great classical portrait; very graceful pose; beautiful lighting and great tonal quality
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very beautiful shot, well-cropped, excellent angle on the shoe; blurring of shoe in the foreground looks distorted; recommend some blurring of pine cone ornament to draw more attention to the shoe in the foreground
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excellent outdoor shot and use of high contrast
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very nice view of boat with landscape; recommend lightening the mountains and sky to give more depth of field
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very nice subject matter, especially with close-up of figure in foreground drawing attention to the approaching sunrise in the center; recommend lightening the figure a little
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nice portrait study and angle; recommend sharpening the features of the face to make it stand out more
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tint works well for buildings but not for sky; recommend lighting the sky a bit
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very nice contrast between Big Ben and the red bus
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good nature/wildlife shot; recommend zooming in on the bird more to give sharper focus to the image
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nice creative use of shadow; recommend just focusing the shadow image on one background object (plain off-white wall) rather than two competing wall surfaces to make the contrast more dramatic
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nice creative use of fence with reflection; I recommend doubling the length of the reflected fence to give more balance and sense of a double pattern to the image
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nice creative image, but the chain fence competes too much with the figure of the walking woman
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nice use of diagonal line across the rectangular frame, and nice use of color, but no clear focal point to the image
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stunning image with great lighting and tonal quality and contrast; focus on foreground rocks helps move viewer's eye from center to right and back to center again
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