Jump to content

dfa photo

Members
 View Profile  See their activity

  • Posts

    135

  • Joined

  • Last visited

 Content Type 

Image Comments posted by dfa photo

    More information about "Untitled"

    Untitled

    in Portrait

          4

    Posted

    very beautiful shot and nicely framed; it's a little over-exposed - some white-out around the lady's hand and shoulder; you have captured an intimate moment - maybe a kiss would make it perfect
    More information about "Sheepman #3"

    Sheepman #3

    in Portrait

          10

    Posted

    great subject and nice focus on head shot; recommend sharper focus on sheep since they are part of the story; recommend tilting man's head more towards the light source to get more light on subject's left eye; moving subject a little to the viewer's right would balance the photo better
    More information about "Aliastair"

    Aliastair

    in Portrait

          2

    Posted

    very nice head shot; great composition and cropping; nice pose and expression; recommend having subject turn both eyes more toward the main light source so both eyes and both sides of face have some light to more sharply define the subject
    More information about "Chuck"

    Chuck

    in Portrait

          2

    Posted

    nice head shot; good pose; good use of natural lighting, especially good to get some light on the eyes so they don't look like dark caves; suggest having person look slighting towards the viewer to add more lively interaction with viewer and subject
    More information about "Fine Lines (17)"

    Fine Lines (17)

    in Nude and Erotic

          7

    Posted

    very beautiful composition and great use of high contrast light and shadow play; recommend tilting the man's face slightly towards the light source to add some vertical movement and facial expression to complement the woman's face and expression caught by the light
    More information about "Oleg"

    Oleg

    in Uncategorized

          7

    Posted

    a near perfect portrait; great pose with chair and expecially with the tense hands; great use of high contrast lighting; I would tilt the man's face a little towards the viewer's left to make the image a little less static and to also allow a little more light on the man' right eye and check
    More information about "Untitled"

    Untitled

    in Uncategorized

          2

    Posted

    very beautiful photo; great composition; good use of natural light; good depth of field; recommend taking photo from another angle which shows all the petals from above
×
×
  • Create New...