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Pros: You captured a nice emotional moment, in nice light. The composition is fairly balanced, and it appears well-exposed. Cons: You are quite far away from the family; this gives the image a sense of emotional distance, rather than being part of the emotional moment. It almost looks like you're spying on the family, which kind of works against the warm tones and family feeling. Also, the square crop doesn't work for me; there's too much space at the top of the frame. Hope this helps!

Love it. Love the expression, the tilt of the head, the overall pose, the lighting, the makeup the hint of nudity. I'm really trying to think of something negative to say ... maybe the grey background is rather dull? Would a color work better? Or just black? Maybe add a hint of a vignette on the edges?