jongaus
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I love the style. Here is plenty for the imagination. Beautiful light and an interesting woman. -
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Excellent composition and colors. Very nice work. Difficult to improve, but here is one suggestion: A higher placement of the lights would perhaps improve the picture further? (Then you have to go back and take more shots...)
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Splendid! A brilliant picture, with a strong fairytail-like content (reminds me of the Christmas glass bulb containing snow falling over a red house when turned upside down). -
The picture is very good. Quite scary, actually, with all the pollution. I find the combination of beauty and hard life very interesting. (Like the movies of Greenaway.)
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Would have cropped the upper edge
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I had an earlier versjon of this out previously. This new version is
cropped more, trying to concentrate the visual idea of the picture.
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Nice colors, a fine silhouette horizon, a very distinct mood. Good work! -
I like to picture old roofs. What do you think about these?
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This photo was taken more than 20 years ago. The motif made me think
about early cubistic works by Picasso and Braque, I thought no wonder
cubism was invented in Paris. In spite of mediocre sharpness, I like
it. What do you think?
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A nice and different portrait. Very good composition! The reflections at her forehead is a bit disturbing though. -
I think this is really great! The movement, the expression in his face, the colors, everything. But I would like to see a version without the motion blur. Does it really add quality here? -
I like this picture, although I didn't realize what it was. I thought it was i staircase and some sort of broken telephone automates or something. I like the colors, the composition, and the mirror effect of both symmetry (the dispensers) and broken lines.
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I specially like the colors: The blue sky, the white house, the arc and the lower right red corner. The elements balance each other beautifully, both in position, area and colours.
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Thanks for comments. Your suggestion is cleaner than mine, and improves the picture in many ways. Still I prefer to keep the naked wall area to the right, I don't know exactly why, maybe I feel it balances the sheets in some way. And then I'm forced to keep some of the left edge too, to prevent the sheets going too far left. Anyway, thanks a lot for your suggestion.
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I think your second version is an improvement. But I would keep the large hole on the right-hand side, or at least parts of it. It "communicates" with the hole under the metal plate. Some thoughts about cropping: Balance is important, but tension is also important. Don't crop to achieve maximum balance, crop to achieve maximum tention while preserving sufficiant balance. Which means that the most obvious cropping will only give the second best result.
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A nice motive. Old wood and paint fascinate me too. I think the composition is a bit too symetric. I would have cropped it more, I suggest you remove most of the area above the metal plate. (The lower part of the image holds the most interesting part.) I would also increase the contrast/saturation by reducing gamma
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A scenery on the island of Mausund outside Mid-Norway...
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