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cute!

How about this one?

Thanks

Yes, I see what you were saying. I thought it might be okay as Rhyann was looking at the camera... How about this crop?

very nice pic, I love the texture of her clothing and hair. I like the lighting on the face, love the catch light in her eyes. good job! and thanks a lot for your comments on my pics!! I really appreciate it!

you can find the original at my website if you go to my profile. yeah, i see what you mean, thanks so much for your comments!

Awesome work! Congrats! 7/7

PS'ed by my friend Steve.

How about this one guys? Thanks for any critiques!

what do you guys think of this one? my last couple requests weren't

that well-received, heh, I must be doing something totally wrong...

thanks for any constructive feedback! :)

Paolo, care to explain the 1? I know it isn't the most original composition, but a 1? Really that bad? Maybe I should give up photography now...

Was a bit soft probably due to camera shake (from exif, it was taken

with 1/60s at 135mm, plus the camera's 1.6x :)

 

I think it looks pretty good though, what do you guys think?

What do you guys think?

looking for critiques, thank you!

IMO the hair kindda made the picture more interesting, I saw it, but thought I'd take a few

frames before I tell her to fix her hair, turned out pretty okay. What do you guys think?

Was the tree too distracting? I thought they kindda frame the picture for me...

 

 

Thanks for any constructive feedback!

This was the newest member of my family, I think he was only 5 days

old when the picture was taken. :)

It wasn't the AF system's fault, it was me. :(

 

This is the problem with shallow DOF.

The was done during my second photoshoot with a model (the very first one was actually

that very morning), it was about one and a half month ago. I didn't like it at first because

the focus was slightly off, but a few friends and a fellow photo.net member liked it. How

can this be improved? Is the background distracting? Would it have been better if focus

was tack sharp?

 

Thank you!

Thanks for your comments! I am very happy with the 20D, I've had it for almost 2 months now.

Are you really only "2 weeks into the whole photography world"? Wow, congrats! Not bad at all for first time indoor lighting shot! I looked at the higher resolution and it was out of focus, was that intentional?

took this from an unplanned photoshoot, background was a bit distracting, I tried to blur

and darken it in PS, also tried to smooth the skin out a bit. obviously, I need to get a lot

better in PS.

 

thanks for any critiques... :)

thanks!

very nice! interesting use of DOF! congrats!

Thank you!