nick_shuval_sergeev

"don't finished" - means some details are missing.The wood around the hole must play some role. Minimum it must be sharp. At maximum something must be on it, that to prepear our ayes to see the hole.

In the hole we see tree and the sky. But the main point of viwe. If want more comments, better send me a letter..Good luck.

I don't know, what is this - pinhole camera. In your case of printing you must do the next.

Contact put the negative on paper (as you did).

Then begin to exposure some time, that good for the center. After some time begin to exposure whith some object (cicle from paper on the spoke, maybe your own hand)in the middle of your picture.

The object mast moving slowly (or else it will the sharp contour. After some time you slowly up the object to the sourse of the light. The riason is - the most light places on your pic must recive more light. It will be exactly tone. Good Experience. Excuse for my English.

Maybe, this photo is too simple for most piople. They prefer good and bright colors, as in magazines. Here I see a dadly tierd man, but you MUST bring this to whole piople! Maybe in tone. THis one hasn't some contrast, and the ayes are not accent (by tone, by composition, by any rulers, pointed our ayes in the main moment, ets..) Here I try to cut some, it must be better... Don't reply me here, I maybe don't come here again. Send a letter.

p.s. the right up corner is too empty, it must to be something there....

What is the main point in this photo? Maybe like this?