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erikadams

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    Excellent perspective. I like it when photographers see action that takes place away from the "official" activity of the event. The dark sky behind the boy really highlights him well.

    THE LAST EMBERS

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    This is the gem of the day. A little overworked in PS, IMO, around the edges. The colors of the folliage have such an appeal that I don't think you need to burn around the edges so much. I like the wavy horizontal line of the top of the foliage, set against the straight line of the shoreline. Nicely done.

    Red Squirrel!

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    Maria was referencing Cecil DeMille, the director, right? I think it was Cecil. This squirrel has such a perfect face. I like the lighting - very soft, and the out of focus tail is just perfect. It's funny how wild animals will seem to pose for you like this.
  1. The composition and lighting are tremendous, but I agree with others - it is obvious she doesn't really play the violin, and you can see that it's not a real musical score. I like the wistful beauty of this model. If only you could find a real violinist who has this kind of visual appeal. Get her to play something melancholy while you photograph her! Best regards.

    Untitled

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    Looks like your camera focused on the rock wall behind them. Difficult with action shots like this. You also need to back off a bit on the zoom - need a little room around the subject to enjoy it, with some exceptions like when you get a close-up of a face.

    Essentials of pastel

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    Wow, Jana. So incredibly appealing. There's something about these colors - appealing not just visually, but on some kind of gut level. I could put this one on my wall and look at it every day.

    City Scape

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    Excellent graphic lines, and a good choice of sepia for this photo. I would have preferred to have the spire on the building a little separated from the lamp, but I like it anyway. best regards.

    The seagull

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    The light color of the clouds behind the seagull looks a little artificial. Was this naturally present, or is it post-processing. If it's the latter, I would recommend you lighten a larger area.

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    Wonderful lighting. I think a lot of photographers would have missed this photo (I would have, anyway), trying to photograph the light itself, rather than using the light. Beautifully done, and a great teaching photo.

    Untitled

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    Definitely keep the bird. If it was a little dot, not discernable as a bird, then you'd want to clone it out. It looks like it's maybe a swallow. Great afterburner photo, BTW.
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