melissa_w.___arizona_calif

November 1, 2004

This is a cropped and B&W version of Harmonica Man. What do you think?

October 30, 2004

Hugh - I didn't get much of a chance to talk with him. From what he said though you know he is a happy soul! There is one picture I missed that I could just kick myself for missing. While I was talking with him he looked up and gave me the most pleasant toothless smile. I tried to get back a few days later but he wasn't there. I have tried a few different versions of this photo. I will be posting them later, possibly for critique. Thanks for fiddling with it though. I love when people do that, it gives me ideas!

Lucas & Frank - I will be posting later a different version of this photo with it cropped. Hope you will take a look!

Thanks again for all the comments, they are much appreciated!

October 29, 2004

Hugh - First off... this is MUCH better! I would be proud to have such a beautiful photo of my child! I really like the lighting. Second... thanks for looking at my photos and leaving a nice comment. After looking at your work I feel honored! Third... I have taken a quick look through your portfolio and love what I see so far, but need more time to take a closer look. I will be keeping in touch!

October 28, 2004

I would say this photo is a no-no! Don't get me wrong, the baby is cute...but in a different setting. The lighting brings out those blue eyes just a little too much! Very unnatural and a little scary.

October 28, 2004

Awesome photo!! Love the perspective, and that red leaf is perfectly placed! 7/7

October 28, 2004

I would have liked it if there was more detail to the clouds. Let the sun go just behind them to get that nice glow. Your horizon is a bit off as well. Try it again when the clouds are as nice as this, and find a nice foreground feature.

October 28, 2004

I posted a very similar photo a few months ago for critique. I like this one better. Let me

know what you think!

October 28, 2004

Yeah, definitely the B&W version!

October 24, 2004

This photo is great. I was curious though to see your other pictures since you wanted to see how this one compares. There was another one that I liked better, it had more shadows, but this was a close second. Colors are striking and the clouds are nice and dramatic. Good job!

October 17, 2004

Brian - I wish I had been able to get closer to this building, but some barbed wire and a very big dog prevented me from doing so! Thanks for the comments!

October 16, 2004

Let me know what you think about this photo! Thanks!

October 13, 2004

I love this series of photos with the lego man! Fantastic!

October 12, 2004

Beautiful dramatic photo! Colors are great! 7/7

October 12, 2004

Very cool action shot! Good job on lighting!!

October 12, 2004

Very nice, vibrant colors! Good job!

October 11, 2004

Those are some nasty looking cucumbers... actually they look like pickles to me! Kinda looks like mold is growing on them or something. Its just not very appealing.

October 7, 2004

This is a great shot! So natural. So was she really watching flying ducks?

October 7, 2004

I really like the feeling of depth in this photo. Good shot!

October 6, 2004

This is a great shot! I like how the guitar just fades into the white! Good job!

October 6, 2004

I love this photo. The colors are great!

October 5, 2004

Let me know what you think!!!

October 4, 2004

I would love to hear any feedback! Thanks!

September 3, 2004

Its definitely interesting and caught my eye. I think it would have been better though if the bottom right corner had been a bit more clean. What I like about it is that it has a lot of different angles, that corner clutters it up a bit with the people and tables. Some might disagree! Still a good shot!