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ozone42

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    Gull

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    This is a great capture of a moment. I bet you snapped off dozens trying to get something like this. Very good composition, personally I might crop a bit of the bottom off. Since there isn't much detail other than the lighting gradient in the sky, I would try NeatImage on this, it would likely remove much of the noise while retaining the detail you want.
  1. This feels a bit oversaturated. I've not used velvia, but I hear that it's very easy to have too much saturation. It's a beautiful scene, but I'd play with the colour adjustments a bit more, it doesn't look natural (unless you're going for surreal.) 5/5

    blind

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    Knew right away what this was, but kudos to you for thinking of it. Do I see the sky between the top two peices? It's an interesting shot, if the sky bit was more obvious it might be even more interesting and striking.
  2. Interesting idea, though I'm not sure the kiss itself was the best subject matter to "capture the chaos." A wider angle of the dance floor or perhaps bar/buffet line would've been better suited. Still, original idea so I'm rating high on that!

    double ego

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    Chris, don't let people like "Don Farra" get to you. I browsed over to their profile, they have no work to show for themselves and seem to rarely ever give any constructive criticism. Your work is excellent, keep it up.
  3. This is stunning, and moving. I hope the child is happier now! Excellent use of light and shadow, the focus on the right eye and softness elsewhere just emphasizes it perfectly. 7/7, I think that may be the second 7/7 I've given. Great job.

    Untitled

          4
    Interesting composition. You could try a lot with this scene. I would try to have one of the diagonals all the way across the frame, corner to corner, just to see if I liked it.
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