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c brake

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    streets of gold

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    Very intriguing.  I love it.  I like the colors, lighting, the lines that draw my eyes through the image.  Maybe just a little sharper would be nice.  This is in my opinion a very original image.  You have a good eye.

    Beata VII

          5
    I like this better than the one where she is looking at the camera. I do think a closer crop would make this portrait much stronger. Very nice subdued lighting and "real" colors.

    Sara

          4
    Well Paul, I can't see anything to criticize. Excellent exposure and lighting, nice framing, color, clarity and dof. A beautiful model and portrait.
  1. This is indeed a very emotional, moving image. What is the story? Is this a result of self flagulation practiced by Muslims or is this the result of a beating? I do think the picture in the background tends to take the focus off of the riveting subject and wish it weren't included in the image. Excellent focus and lighting.

    ____

          24
    Stunning! Wonderful, wonderful focus, good composition, nice expression on the model's face (not to mention she is gorgeous). The only thing I think I may try to improve is her hair. I just can't see any detail in it.
  2. Looks like an absolutely delicious burger! Very nice light and true colors, focus is good. You just might want to rotate it a little to the right so things aren't leaning and looking like they may slide out of the image :) You may also want to crop that little bit of white in the upper right quadrant.

    SKIAGRAFIA II

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    Very fine diagonal work. The lines and patterns really draw my attention and hold it. Good light, composition and focus. And I think b&w is probably the best medium for this image. Nice work.

    Returning

          9
    It is difficult for me to decide what your subject is in this image. The blurred background makes one think the branches are the subject. If that's the case, the background is really taking the viewer's attention from the branches. You might try shooting those branches from a different angle that leaves the house out of the image. If the house is the subject, then you really need to have sharp focus on it rather than the branches. The colors are very pleasing as well as the light and exposure.
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