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yorick

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    "Independence day"

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    It's well exposed and sharp, but I feel there's too much in it. I can't quite decide where the focal point is. Perhaps it could be simplified by cropping to between the two lamp-posts?
  1. Beautiful exposure. The sun is white to me, but there's a lot of detail in the sky. I find the arc of light on the edge of the pool disturbing. It draws my eye away from the rest of the picture. Perhaps better if it was not such a perfect arc? Love the reflection.

    maturity

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    the face is very strong but too small in the frame. If you're going to leave that much space around, it should contribute some context to the image. I'm left wondering where is he, why does he look like that, what's he wearing, etc.

    Gilleleje Rowboats

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    To me this is a perfect example of pattern in photography. Its natural yet almost abstract at the same time. The parallel lines of the walkway? on the left are an essential part of the composition, with just the right amount visible, and the mooring ropes are also perfect. Could not be improved.

    Seascape

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    Sorry, Pete, but this does nothing for me - as someone asked me recently 'what are you trying to say with this?' Perhaps the tones are clearer in a print?
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