aaronsizer

April 9, 2004

The rocks and surf are interesting, but the horizon looks a bit slanted.

April 9, 2004

The white wing draws too much of my attention.

April 9, 2004

While living in Santa Barbara, I always thought these steps at Paseo Nuevo would make for a cool shot, but never had my camera with me at the right moment. Interesting to see that you had the same idea.

April 9, 2004

I think I probably used the same ledge as you to shoot this bath in the Alcazar. There's a slightly different version in my folder, if you're interested. I thought this spot was awesome--nice and cool, few people.

April 8, 2004

This is a slightly altered repost. Comments appreciated!

April 8, 2004

Interesting texture, but the colors seem a bit weak.

April 7, 2004

I really like the composition, but something about the levels seems artificial, too contrasty, burned-in.

March 30, 2004

Nice panorama, but it could use some color correction.

March 29, 2004

A fascinating exhibit at the American Museum of Natural History in New

York. Comments appreciated.

March 19, 2004

I don't know--a little unsettling. The composition is so symmetrical that it makes the slightly off-center framing seem odd.

March 18, 2004

Yeah, great idea, but I agree that the apple should be in sharper focus.

March 18, 2004

Pretty hard to tell what it is without glancing at the title.

March 18, 2004

Beautiful colors, fairly sharp focus. Too bad the top got cut off.

March 18, 2004

Nice colors and DOF, but you might consider cropping differently. Get that sucker out of the middle.

March 18, 2004

Not sure I agree. Yes, the highlights are blown out. But it seems somehow appropriate--the shot has an almost painted feel. I'll take it as is, thank you.

March 18, 2004

Great silhouette, good monochromatic color. If it were me, I might crop just a hair off the left to get rid of the curve in the railing. Just my feeling.

March 18, 2004

Interesting composition, could use a little color correction, though.

March 18, 2004

I like the multi-tiered effect. Could maybe use a tiny bit more contrast.

March 18, 2004

Nice colors, but the sun and reflection right in the middle make the composition pretty static.

March 18, 2004

Try placing the horizon away from the vertical center of the frame. Nice colors, though.

March 18, 2004

Hey, Jeremy. That reflection is totally sweet, very original (trust me, I've looked at a lot of sunset pictures on Photo.net). I wonder if there's a way to crop it that accentuates the reflection. Thinking about it, I'm kind of torn. On the one hand, it seems a shame to lose the clouds toward the top of the frame, especially with the nice blue tones. On the other hand, a lower crop calls attention to the reflection by giving it a greater percentage of frame space. It has the added advantage of moving the horizon away from the center of the frame, making the composition more dynamic. You should request a critique of this. I'd be interested to see what people have to say.