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This was taken by the light of the full moon. Comments would be appreciated. Thanks.

Animesh, thanks very much for your compliment and advice.

Very nice tonality. Her intent expression (ignoring the camera) is appropriate.

It was cold that day, but the (mostly) undisturbed snow was worth the trip. I'd like very much

to hear any comments.

John and Eduardo, thanks very much for your time & your comments.

The skin tones are very nice, but I agree that the left side (er, model's right side) is blown out a little too much. Nevertheless I like it better than the original.

I'm not sure if the wet look really works with ordinary clothing. Call me philistine, but I look at it and think, "why is this lady in the water?"

Yes, the unfocused flower in the foreground is quite distracting. As you gain experience, this is something you will want to avoid.

I happened to catch the sunlight at just the right time, I think. Comments are welcomed.

Thanks.

Thanks for viewing.

This was on a cold day in Maine. I'd appreciate comments.

For me the rising moon doesn't really work. It looks like damage on the negative. I like the rocks and water, though.

I would like to hear opinions on the composition and tonality (or anything else, I suppose).

Thanks.

Thank you for looking.

The crop is a little tight for my tastes. Very nice colors and lighting.

The light beam looks faked -- heck, it looks like the phasers on Star Trek. Dead-center composition is not very interesting. The title is sophomoric.

Looks like you had a rare opportunity and took full advantage of it. Nice.

 

Side issue: you DID wash the underside of the car afterwards? Nothing promotes rust quite like salt water.

Quite elegant. Refreshing.

Nice lighting, and the vertical orientation works well here. To me it looks a little bit oversharpened, but maybe I'm imagining that.

Not sure if this qualifies as "fine art," but that was the most appropriate category. Thanks for

looking.

To me the water takes up too much space. I'd crop at the bottom (or it would have been better to aim the camera up to include treetops).

 

The camera was clearly tilted to one side. This is easy to fix.

To me it seems a little dark. Nice composition and cropping.

Considering that you must have just snapped it off in a hurry, this is nicely done. Very few distracting elements. A square crop, eliminating the wall on the left side, might work better.

This is cropped from the original. I've fooled with the original (in my portfolio) and can't

decide which crop I like best. I'd appreciate comments on the composition. Thanks for

looking.

Now that is a nice capture, especially since Mom looks so excited and the kid so serene. Well done.