patricia_eifel

August 3, 2003

Luminous color and great detail with lovely composition. Would have been great without the bees as well.

August 3, 2003

Excellent color, detail and pattern. A little bit of Mondrian here I think. Very good one Carl!

August 3, 2003

Just playing around in PS after reading the chapter on masks. Comments appreciated!

July 28, 2003

I think this is perfect as is and I understood the title immediately. It is a beatuiful image even in this small on-line version and I'm certain the print is exquisite. Wonderful.

July 27, 2003

Looks like more than the door is missing Carl... Sometimes it is hard to part with the original "straight" version but I agree that elimination of the less compelling participants simplifies the composition and is very effective. Thanks Carl. I think I will go back to the original and create a "Root" version.

July 26, 2003

Please give me any thoughts and suggestions. Thanks.

July 26, 2003

A simple scene, but I liked it. What do you think? As always, thanks for your

comments.

July 25, 2003

Hi Carol ---

I like the tinting on this. I think the dark glassy foreground space is important to the composition. It contributes to the vague feeling of danger that I think you want to covey. Perhaps still not quite dark enough for Dante but beautiful none-the-less.

July 25, 2003

Nice composition. Perhaps a little over exposed?

July 25, 2003

Thanks! Actually, the reflection was of the little boy's mother...it was too dark to add a polarizer and I don't really mind the reflection which I think adds a little context but I can see that the image might have been cleaner without it.

July 25, 2003

Please comment...

July 24, 2003

Perfect composition. The shadows make this photograph. It would have been painful to see this with an empty camera - congratulations on your vision and persistence!

July 24, 2003

Excellent detail, color. A good eye for the chance juxtaposition. My only criticism is that I think the composition would have been more effective with a little more margin on the left side of the window. Perhaps there is a little more hiding under the frame on the slide...?

July 24, 2003

A marvelous image, evocative of the '30s. 7/7

July 23, 2003

Spectacular light and tonal range. Lovely composition. Great image!

July 23, 2003

This is a beautiful composition with the angled shadows and peeling paint in the second room drawing the eye to the center of the shot. Unfortunately the DOF problem prevents this from being a truly great shot. Definitely worth returning to the site if you can.

July 22, 2003

Another view of THE TOWER. Thoughts?

July 21, 2003

Elizabeth - I like this one very much just as it is. A very gentle, loving portrait. I particularly like the way you handled the periphery. --- Patricia

July 21, 2003

I think a little more contrast would help here?

July 21, 2003

Very interesting composition, perspective and central figure adds sense of mystery that makes the image. Would have been spectacular with a little more DOF.

July 21, 2003

Interesting idea but a little too dark to have the intended impact I think.

July 20, 2003

Hi! I'm enjoying your recent explorations--

In this case, I like the texture overlay on the flower very much. I think the crack detracts a little from the compostion though.

July 20, 2003

I like the concept and the compostion very much, but a couple of things bother me a bit. -- The transition between the crane and background is very abrupt making it look pasted on, particularly in the region of the perch. I go back and forth about the sepia, but I think I would have preferred it in a cooler tone.

July 20, 2003

The first version that I uploaded was never as satisfying as the wet prints that I have

made. I have been working on my digital darkroom skills and this is a second

attempt. Better?

July 20, 2003

Beautiful composition and clarity.

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