kevin_carter1

This is a good shot of the woman, but i find the colour draws my eye away from her.. which i don't think you want me to do, or maybe you do ? Nice work on the whole,

Kevin

Shots like this will benefit from having a small frame around them.. i can't tell where the photo stops and where photo.net begins... good work though.. love how punchy it is

I like how the background is blown out to create a studio-like feel whilst keeping the water properly exposed... could use some contrast i think, but that might just be my monitor

Looks too fake, photoshopped to death

This is a good example of Op Art... i like how your eye dances between which value is positive and negative....

Very nice

6/6

Good Idea ! Nice effect !

Keep it up

Love the Point of View...

If i had to pick something negative... all i can see is that it's about 1/2 - 1 stop underexposed...this helps keep the sky satureated, but i think that if the greens of the foliage were brighter this shot would REALLY sing...louder than it already does anyways.... nice work 5/6

Great shot !

And your portfolio looks to be coming along really well...

keep it up

Kevin

The quality of this shot is lost *i think* in the selection of focus... which lies somewheres between the nose and the eyes... if you had picked either one or the other it would've really sang... as it is i find my eye keeps moving around, trying to fall on something interesting and in focus

This shot would sing if it was tack sharp and a little less exposed... it's cool how much the two faces melt together !!

just a clean shot using only window light, and a piece of foamcore as

a background... flare on screen is part of graphic, not lens flare...

Let me know what you think,

Kevin

carter.photo@gmail.com

Here's some fun i had with two differently coloured glowsticks and

some studio strobes... 30 sec exposure F5.6

Let me know what you think,

Kevin

carter.photo@gmail.com

I would like to see a different background that makes the product stand out... otherwise nice work... love the mirrored surface

Thanks for looking !

Please let me know what you think,

Kevin

carter.photo@gmail.com

Love the Old School !!! Keep it up... this photo has an extreme sense of depth

WOW IS THAT A REALLY PENCIL DRAWING !!! *sarcasm*

everyone has a few of these hidden away from when photoshop filters were in style...

Very Good!! Classic Window portrait, good model, nice pose...

Great shot... how is it that men like this always seem to take such sharp photographs...

This picture is really eerie to me... like it's a photo of a highschool girl who died in a car accident on her way to the prom or something... maybe it's the photoshop filter or the pose... i don't know...standard shot though... if i had to pick at something, i'd say that her forehead and cheeks are too blown out...

This photo strikes me somehow... i think it's the eyes... or the

perfect complexion. I think it's the classic Golden Mean composition

which is created from left to right... I debated cropping the small

hairline from the top left corner, but i felt that the stray hair

would be lost without it... Let me know what you think,

Kevin

Carter.photo@gmail.com

This shot is part of a project i've been working on where I'm

developing Comp-Cards for models that I've found in my area.

Please let me know what you think.

If you have any further questions or comments, you can email me at

carter.photo@gmail.com

Thank you for your critique,

Kevin

I agree with the gentleman who commented on her legs being cut off. It needs to be showing the entire leg, or cropped higher....The background ( I feel) is too busy, my eye is drawn to the reds and purples in the lower portion, right to the problemed legs. I also don't like the reflection in the glasses that doesn't allow you to see the model eyes/expression.

I know it sounds like i'm really calling you out on this photo, but isn't that the point for critique... Personally I'd rather hear bad things about my work than someone saying "it's good, i like it" which tells you nothing... and comments on the model really have no merit...this isn't models.net or hotornot.com....

Please email me if you want to discuss this further : carter.photo@gmail.com

Kevin

Good concept on this print, I think I know what you're trying to accomplish, however I feel that the contrast needs to be bumped up by a paper grade or so, and the fact tha nothing is in focus really doesn't allow my eye to settle on anything ! I'd love to see a print with these corrections made.

Kevin

Good Print, love the control of tonality.

Composition leads your eye to the beautiful clouds !! I wish I could print like this in the D/R

Cheers,

Kevin

Good idea, but I find it looks a little too digital. I would like to see this pint if the streaking was toned down some