behemot3

Somehow I like your style in general - and this photo is a classic example of your style - pure and light and simple but somehow meaningfull - In all your pictures you manage to depict the personality of the model and this is catching me

tchnique is more then good and this combination gives perfect results -I really like your works

Any comments are welcome, thx? - what do you think of toning and

colour saturation?

Are the composition and the format good ?

I know, I know .. as the father of this litle girl I cannot be fully

objective - so any commnets and ratings are welcome

the light is very fine ( mystique a little) and composition very fine ( crop , angle etc)

There is something in his eyes that attracts a lot.

The down size is ... well IMHO works for me so I cannot find any

regards jk

P.S. I like it more than the previous one

After a little thought I decided to switch the photos and the no 1 is according to previous suggestions and the oryginal imho is attatched to this comment

Of course it is the same boat- I was inspired by Pawel's shot and tried to explore the same theme, the same place; In fact I have applied a photo 85 filter (in PS) and did some blurring on waters (motion) and on the sand( gausian). thanx for your coment, and Pozdrowionka,

Thank you for your input - I believe the off centre composition would be better but as you noticed I wanted to contain the other boat , too. this however is a try to combine both issues, any better?

Small manipulations in PS including toning and photo filters- and

little blurring- any comments are welcome, thx

Please comment on toning and composition and on anything you feel

deserves your comment, thx

Highlights:- composition is more than fine, the pose is very good- - shows thew beauty of the model and atracts attention - really stylish; toniing- well - I do not know exactly - I would say it is in the middle - not rerally good but not bad either -

Bad points: - toning - well I think it is the only point IO am not sure of - well and maybe sharpnes -- - I would say it is a good photo but il lacks some element to be a perfect one

regards,

jk

the blur effect does not work for me - I cannot seea anything in focus and that makes me feel bad about the photo. I would prefer ale least her face and arm in focus - or something l9ike that.

As usual your work looks perfect- what I like a lot is lighting and pose. especially her face conveys the mood of ... dreaming - I like it a lot

regards,

Nice composition good angle and fine tones and DOF.

by the way how are you? I havent' seen yoo on gg for ages? are you alive?

Any good?

all comments and ratings are welcome

Does it have the "vintage" look? (apart from the text in the top

right corner) Will it look good in 20 years time?